Why should we save trees!!!
Hi friends, today I am going to talk about why should we save trees…….
We should save trees because trees are living things just like us,trees give us water and also in the olden days they used to give us bubble gum,trees make the world a better place,trees also give us fruits and vegetables.
If we did not have trees we would not be living because trees also give us air to breath trees are very important for our world trees save us from bad air,In india there were not many trees that is why there was a lot of bad air which causes sickness,cough and many dangers 
things to our body there are different type of trees, in the olden days trees was the only thing for people because people used to make clothes out of tree leaves and get food from trees,trees are very useful.the end,
things to our body there are different type of trees, in the olden days trees was the only thing for people because people used to make clothes out of tree leaves and get food from trees,trees are very useful.the end,
Thank you friends for listening.
Kia ora Megan my name is Jedi I am a yr 6 at Yaldhurst Model school, I love your speech because it has a lot of information. You have used a lot of commas maybe next time you should put more full stops. Great job keep up the great work Megan!
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Hi my name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School and I really like this post because you have used lot's of detail and information. Did you have a speech competition or you just had to write a speech? Next time I think you should add the pictures in a different place.
ReplyDeleteHey Megan!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your speech about why trees are important, I agree, trees are so important. I am interested about how people used trees to make bubble gum, do you think you could expand on that? Maybe you could get a friend or teacher to record you presenting it and you could post that?
From Hannah,
Yaldhurst Model School
Kia ora Megan,
ReplyDeleteI think you might want to check some of your facts about how ' in the olden days the trees made gum' I'm pretty sure that isn't true but if it was then maybe next time you also might want to link the information source.
I like how you were very adamant about that people should keep growing trees.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
Hi Megan,
ReplyDeleteYou did a good blog post.
I liked how you added facts about how useful they are.
This reminds me when I do my speech writing at school.
I am going to ask you this because the elections are coming up, do you like the green party.
Kind regards Ian.
Canterbury.
Yaldhurst Model School.
hello Megan,
ReplyDeleteI like you speech about trees and why we should save them, but I noticed that you had lots of typing errors like not putting in a [SPACE] after a comma and not having multiple paragraphs.
I have one question for you, can you check your typing before you upload a blog post?
From Jacob M,
at Yaldhurst Model School
Hi Megan.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great speech.
I like the topic.
Elias
Yaldhurst Model School
Year 6